Short Reflection on Happiness Paper

Reading through my paper, after Professor Pahigian graded it, I learned many things. Something that stuck out to me from the beginning was that I can be redundant. One of my first comments were how I used such as and etc. in the same sentence, I should have stuck with such as and not included the etc. Another thing I learned was that I need to make sure that I check that all authors find a way to agree with that argument, not just one of them. Along with that I need to involve both of my arguments (for this paper) exercise and healthy relationships in each body paragraph. From the overview of my paper I now see that I need to read deeper in to the text, which inherently means I need to connect better with the authors and speakers. I realized after reading this that I should think out of the box, I need to put myself out there, and be confident in my writing.