My happiness paper was a reflection on what I believe brings happiness to life. Everyone had differing opinions, personally I believe that good relationships and exercise allow a life of fulfillment. I spoke personally about my family and my friends, to connect with the authors and their beliefs/research on happiness. In the long run, I … [Read more…]
For the second essay of the semester I wrote about how technology does not allow us to have the strong relationships that we need to sustain happiness. First draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GOlvy0LfPCGK7Qh9DpIj6VPPkmuHpLq_7FkszuFL5TA/edit?usp=sharing Second draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15KQau0zapJANX7ASlEajQUR43LzfKmEbNZvy2WUp01Q/edit?usp=sharing Third Draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cln-z4fzzmsFlF4m-VIXVX8OskH-16VBmLc3HqjNl5o/edit?usp=sharing Final draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UUx6p1SorVsyLlg8PqV_W-ua9Xe-rZSRNOM3c84VD5k/edit?usp=sharing
After working on my essay during the weekend, I noticed that I needed to make some global changes to my technology essay. My first global change was becoming aware that I needed to incorporate more than one author into my body paragraphs, I believe that is partially where I struggled on our last essay. Therefore, … [Read more…]
I believe that my best example of peer review for this essay comes from Abby’s paper. I read her first draft of her essay and it is already off to a very good start. I was able to add a few ideas to hopefully help add strength and depth to her page. There was a … [Read more…]
Reading through my paper, after Professor Pahigian graded it, I learned many things. Something that stuck out to me from the beginning was that I can be redundant. One of my first comments were how I used such as and etc. in the same sentence, I should have stuck with such as and not included … [Read more…]
