The main part of my revision process was my three global changes. The first one was how I needed to summarize the main points of my paragraphs. For example, a few of my paragraphs ended with a sentence that just flowed with the paragraph. After a helpful tip from a classmate a summarized the ending … [Read more…]
To strengthen my essay about happiness, I plan to incorporate the ideas of my classmates. So far we have had two days where we were able to help each other. One day we focused on our thesis’ and the other day (although morning classes got canceled and we were unable to meet) we focused on … [Read more…]
As I begin to write my essay, I will keep in mind Barclay’s formula. Using Barclay’s formula quotation, I will be able to use quotations correctly. Thus far, I have learned how insert quotes from the authors we have read. First, I begin with my own claim and introduce it. Then I insert the quote … [Read more…]
